I've been in a relationship with a beautiful girl for like 6 months now. All of a sudden, her parents decide that she shouldn't be going out with me because I'm not mormon. She and I feel like crap about it, and still see each other whenever we can like at school and stuff. But, it feels like being caged in or something, not being able to go on dates or anything. Therefore I am "bound to lose that which means the most to me."
Anyways, I like this piece a lot. Really interesting, so good job! Only thing is I would myself like some color in there !